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Sunday, October 19, 2008

I came to Malaysia, met many new friends and met many new things. Here is different from Xinjiang. Xinjiang, said that if I have the impression that the color is yellow, then Malaysia is green
I do not like Malaysia's weather not only rain every day, but also very hot.



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1 comments:

instructor said...

I came to Malaysia, met many new friends and met many new things.

YOU SHOULD RE-WRITE THE SENTENCE LIKE THIS:

WHEN I CAME TO MALAYSIA I MADE MANY NEW FRIENDS. I ALSO HAD A LOT OF NEW EXPERIENCES.

Here is different from Xinjiang. Xinjiang, said that if I have the impression that the color is yellow then Malaysia is green


LIFE IN MALAYSIA IS DEFFERENT FROM XINJIANG. THE SCENERY IN MALAYSIA IS ALWAYS GREEN BUT IN XINJIANG IT IS ALWAYS YELLOW.


I do not like Malaysia's weather not only rain every day, but also very hot.


I DO NOT LIKE MALAYSIAN WEATHER BECAUSE IT ALWAYS RAINS HERE. IT IS ALSO VERY HOT HERE.


TRY TO USE SHORT AND SIMPLE SENTENCES.